Scary Walk Home

Pamela · (#1 (**permalink**))

Hi Friends, Composed this one, using one of Eileen's styles,decided to call it Scary Walk Home, something only women fear it seems,Men dont seem to be frightened of walking home in the dark,hope you like it...Pam

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willie joe · (#2 (**permalink**))

Pamela, that's good. Intresting melody and chord structure, all it needs is a bridge with different melody and chords to build a climax before the last verse.

romeo1959 · (#3 (**permalink**))

its noting for you Pam to compose this kind of music

but i'm not scary lol
but its sound funny not scary i'm afraid:whistle:

Romeo
but its in my Pammap

gordon · (#4 (**permalink**))

Hi Pam.

Same as t'other place I'm afraid .

Good concept,..... nice little song,...... but it seemed more like an ad-lib than a composition.

Little sloppy at the end, the melody went for a ball of chalk somewhere ??

Not a bad effort, but could have been so much better with a little more work.

Kind Regards
Gordon

spike · (#5 (**permalink**))

Hi Pam
Except for the ending which was a bit "in the air" it was like the Shadows meets Alfred Hitchcock and I liked it, the guitar sound was good with the volume changes, a good fun piece but I was never in any danger of crapping myself . Ooooooooooooooooo

Cheers
Spike

Pamela · (#6 (**permalink**))

Grateful thnks to Willie Joe, Romeo and Spike observations taken on board, and to Gordon I wouldn't expect any less from you...Pam

krazykeys · (#7 (**permalink**))

Pam,

I wasn't scared either! Nanny, nanny boo-boo!!!

I think this was a pretty good rendering and find nothing seriously wrong with it, but I know from listening to you through the years that you are capable of much better. I sense maybe a little "rush" here?

Good stuff regardless, young lady!

Pamela · (#8 (**permalink**))

Thank you Krazy for your comments and your observations taken on board...Pam

ewan oosami · (#9 (**permalink**))

Hello Pam
Loved it - ok so the ending was a bit iffy but the guitars were great, the composition was fun especially with the wind and screams which weren't overdone. Made me smile anyway and I let the rest of the office listen to it in their tea break (hope you don't mind) as I'm at work - they all thought it was great fun and couldn't quite get their heads round the fact that it was all played on a keyboard.
All the best
Ewan

Johntel · (#10 (**permalink**))

Hi Pam

Great modern composition. Bravo Lady.