Hi Friends, Here's one I composed yesterday using one of Eileen Lowry's quickstep styles,called it Quick Toe Tapper, hope you like it...Pam





MP3 http://www.box.net/shared/8y8cpo2pse

Hi Pam
Sounds like you're feeling better already!
As you say a real toe-tapper - it sounded like an upbeat version of Take These Chains From My Heart when I first heard it then it took a metamorphic journey into your own ideas. Maybe a bit cluttered with voices, they seemed to fight eachother for attention but it was still an enjoyable,as you say, toe-tapper. Well played
Cheers
Spike

Hello Pam
A nice composition, gets the feet going. It does have a few familiar phrases about it but I guess it's hard to come up with a tune that hasn't. I hope you are recovering from your illness.
All the best
Ewan

Hi Pam,

Delightful little tune. It conveys a happy feeling, and yes, definitely a toe tapper!

I see what Spike meant though about the voices being a bit cluttered and fighting for attention. I narrowed it down to the organ on channel 7. If you mute that track, the whole song becomes much "cleaner". If it were me, (and this is just my personal taste), I would try lowering the organ volume on 7 until it wasn't fighting the other instruments. Then, if things still seemed a bit cluttered, I would just eliminate it all together.

Overall, a fine song and another great upload from one of my favorite ladies.

Thank you very much Spike, Ewan and Krazy, for your comments, I submitted it on another site, and someone said it had shades of Cystal Chandeliers in it, not intentional, and as for being cluttered, I have always had this problem putting in everything but the kitchen sink, smack on the wrist Pam, anyway thank you again...Naughty Pam

Hi Pam.

We have already shared our feelings on "Composing" versus "Making it up as you go along "

So lets at least agree that this is,after all, a good "Toe Tapper " .


Kind Regards
Gordon

Sorry Gordon, ant compose any other way, I'm certainly not going to get the manuscript paper out and write everything down,that's just not my style...Pam